Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. My father sent it to me when I was about five years old. It's, uh, very small, and I will always drive it in the dark and other public places. I think it is it was enjoyable.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bag is definitely popular in my country. Even everyone has a bag. We always drive back in the gardens and other public places.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个相关细节。注意用“give me”或“buy me”表达父亲送车,不要用“send it to me”;骑自行车应说“ride a bike”,而不是“drive it”。“I will always”不适合描述过去的习惯,可改为“I often”。最后避免重复和自我更正,例如直接说“It was a lot of fun.”
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a small bike when I was about five. I often rode it around my neighborhood, and I really enjoyed it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答时要紧扣题目中的“bikes”,注意听清并正确使用关键词,避免把“bike”说成“bag”。第二句“Even everyone has a bag”语法不自然,可以说“Many people own a bike”。骑车应使用“ride”,而不是“drive”;还要说明自行车为什么受欢迎,并提供一个具体场景或理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in busy cities. They are affordable and convenient, and they are also a good way to exercise.
× It's, uh, very small,
✓ It was, uh, very small,
这段话是在回忆小时候的自行车,应用过去时 was,而不是现在时 is。描述过去发生或存在的情况时,注意保持时态一致。
× and I will always drive it in the dark and other public places.
✓ and I always drove it in the dark and other public places.
这里描述的是小时候经常做的事,应使用过去时 drove,而不是表示将来的 will drive。回忆过去的习惯时,可以用一般过去时表达。
× I think it is it was enjoyable.
✓ I think it was enjoyable.
这里是在评价小时候骑车的经历,因此 enjoyable 应与过去的经历搭配,用 was。去掉 is 也能避免句子中出现重复的谓语和自我修正痕迹。
× Yes, bag is definitely popular in my country.
✓ Yes, bags are definitely popular in my country.
这里泛指一类物品,使用可数名词 bag 时应使用复数 bags;复数主语还要搭配 are。