Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Відповідайте в минулому часі, оскільки йдеться про дитинство: скажіть “I had” замість “I have”. Уточніть, що велосипед був вашим, наприклад “my first bike”, і додайте одну конкретну деталь — його колір, розмір або те, де ви на ньому каталися. Уникайте незрозумілих фраз на кшталт “I wear a child” і “my once bike”, а також заповнювачів “uh”; достатньо двох-трьох чітких речень.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and it was quite big and bright red. I loved riding it in the park near my home.

Gợi ý: Дайте чітку відповідь і поясніть її однією зрозумілою причиною. Замість “every people” використайте “many people” або “almost everyone”; не змішуйте велосипеди й автомобілі, якщо не пояснюєте порівняння. Завершіть думку повним реченням і наведіть конкретний приклад — наприклад, люди їздять на велосипедах у парках або використовують їх для коротких поїздок.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them in parks or use them for short trips because they are an inexpensive way to get around. You can often see families cycling together at the weekend.

× Yes, I have one.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had rather than have.

× I wear a child.

✓ I was a child.

Wear does not fit the intended meaning. To describe being a child in the past, use was, the past tense of be.

× They have a very beautiful and big bike.

✓ I had a very beautiful and big bike.

The student is describing their own bike, so I is the appropriate subject pronoun rather than they. Had also matches the past-time context.

× It's my once bike.

✓ It was my own bike.

The sentence refers to a bike the student had as a child, so use was rather than is. Was also makes the sentence fit the past-time context.

× I really like this because it's my favorite.

✓ I really liked it because it was my favorite.

The student is talking about a childhood bike, so the past-tense forms liked and was are appropriate. It is also clearer than this when referring back to the bike.

× Every people have a bike.

✓ Everyone has a bike.

Every is used with a singular noun, as in every person. Alternatively, use everyone, which takes a singular verb: has.

× Every people have a bike.

✓ Everyone has a bike.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so it takes has, not have.

× Car bike is the most popular on the park when people leave them.

✓ Bikes are the most popular in the park when people leave them there.

Use in for something located within a park, not on. The correction also makes bikes the subject so the sentence is grammatically complete and agrees with the plural pronoun them.