Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I have when I was 6 my father bought me a bike and and for the first time the bike has four tiles to bothers me and my dad pushed me and pushed me and back of me back of me and and slowly.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

And yes I did but but nowadays people most use and Dian Dong Chu.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答“有”,并用过去时讲述经历:把“have”改为“had”,“has”改为“had”。“four tiles”可能是想说“training wheels(辅助轮)”;描述父亲在后面扶着自行车时,可说“my dad held the back of the bike”。避免重复“and”和“pushed”,用一两个清晰的细节补充即可。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was six, and it had training wheels. He held the back of the bike while I practised, and I gradually learned to ride on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答现在的情况时,用“Yes, I do”而不是“Yes, I did”。明确说明自行车是否受欢迎,并解释如今人们更常使用什么;“电动车”可以说“electric scooters”或“electric bikes”。删掉重复的“but”,并用“although”或“because”连接观点和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially for exercise and short trips. However, many people now prefer electric scooters because they are quicker and require less effort.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes I have when I was 6 my father bought me a bike and and for the first time the bike has four tiles...

✓ Yes, I did. When I was 6, my father bought me a bike, and for the first time the bike had four tiles...

问题询问的是你小时候有没有自行车,回答应使用一般过去时。这里的“have”应改为“did”;描述当时自行车的情况时,“has”也应改为“had”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× ...the bike has four tiles to bothers me...

✓ ...the bike had four tiles to bother me...

“to”后应接动词原形,不能使用第三人称单数形式“bothers”,所以应改为“bother”。此外,“tiles”的意思是“瓷砖”,如果你想表达自行车的辅助轮或其他部件,请使用准确的词。

6: Present tense issue(现在时错误)

× And yes I did but but nowadays people most use and Dian Dong Chu.

✓ Yes, I do, but nowadays people most use Dian Dong Chu.

问题询问的是现在自行车在你们国家是否流行,因此回答应使用一般现在时。“I did”是过去时,应改为“I do”。

20: Incorrect adverb placement(副词位置错误)

× ...nowadays people most use...

✓ ...nowadays people mostly use...

如果想表达“人们主要使用……”,修饰动词“use”的副词“mostly”通常放在动词前。原句中的“most”位置不合适,应改为“mostly”。“Dian Dong Chu”含义不明确,因此保留原表达。

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