Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 과거의 경험을 묻는 질문이므로 과거 시제를 사용하세요. 현재형인 “I don't have” 대신 “I didn't have”를 쓰고, “I usually the ride”는 문법적으로 틀리므로 “I usually rode”로 고치세요. 자전거가 없었다는 답과 자주 탔다는 내용이 서로 모순되므로, 빌려 탔는지 등을 덧붙여 의미를 분명히 하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t own a bike when I was a child. However, I sometimes borrowed one from my friends and rode it around our neighborhood.

Gợi ý: 질문에 먼저 직접 답하고, 그다음 이유를 설명하세요. “I would like to say”는 이 문맥에서 부자연스러우므로 “I think”로 바꾸고, 자전거를 일반적으로 말할 때는 “bikes”를 사용하세요. “more possibility to make the accidents” 대신 “a higher risk of having an accident”처럼 자연스러운 표현을 익히세요. 자전거가 인기 있는지에 대한 답도 분명히 제시하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among younger people. However, many older people are cautious about cycling because they think busy roads make accidents more likely.

× No, I don't have it.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use didn't rather than don't. One is more suitable than it when referring to whether you had a bike at all.

× I usually the ride a bicycle, but I don't have a bike in my childhood.

✓ I usually ride a bicycle, but I didn't have a bike in my childhood.

The is incorrectly placed between the adverb usually and the verb ride. Remove it. Also, use the past tense didn't have because in my childhood refers to the past.

× I would like to say the older people in my country think the bike is dangerous because there are more possibility to make the accidents when you ride a bike.

✓ I would say older people in my country think bikes are dangerous because there are more possibilities to make the accidents when you ride a bike.

The is unnecessary before older people when referring to older people in general. The phrase the bike also sounds like it refers to a specific bike; use bikes to refer to bicycles in general.

× I would like to say the older people in my country think the bike is dangerous because there are more possibility to make the accidents when you ride a bike.

✓ I would like to say the older people in my country think the bike is dangerous because there are more possibilities to make the accidents when you ride a bike.

Possibility is countable, and more requires a plural noun in this sentence. Use possibilities. Because the corrected subject is plural, are is appropriate.

× I would like to say the older people in my country think the bike is dangerous because there are more possibility to make the accidents when you ride a bike.

✓ I would like to say the older people in my country think the bike is dangerous because there are more possibilities to make accidents when you ride a bike.

The is not needed before accidents when referring to accidents in general. Use make accidents without the definite article.