Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I have a bike when I traveled. It was sinked by my grandmother. It's my birthday gifts, and I like it very much.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I think bikes. Uh, in my uh trih hood, almost every tribe have their own bike. They should learn how to bike the bike by themselves. It's good.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充自行车是谁送的、你为什么喜欢它。注意使用过去时:童年经历应说“had”,而不是“have”;“sinked”在这里表达不清楚,如果想说“买的”,用“bought”;“birthday gifts”应改为“birthday gift”。尽量避免使用意思不明确的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My grandmother bought it for me as a birthday gift, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 开头直接说明自行车是否受欢迎,并用一个具体理由或例子展开。删去“I think bikes”这类未完成表达和过多停顿;“trih hood”和“tribe”意思不清楚,请确认想表达的是“neighborhood”还是“children”。注意主谓一致(如“every child has”),以及骑车应说“ride a bike”,而不是“bike the bike”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. In my neighborhood, many families have a bike for each child. Riding is a convenient way to get around, and it also gives children a chance to exercise.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I have a bike when I traveled.

✓ I had a bike when I traveled.

句子描述的是过去(when I traveled),所以主句中的 have 也应使用过去式 had。建议根据时间状语判断动词时态,过去发生的事情使用一般过去时。

9: Verb in the past participle form

× It was sinked by my grandmother.

✓ It was sunk by my grandmother.

被动语态的结构是 be 动词 + 过去分词。sink 的过去分词是 sunk,不是 sinked。

1: Singular and plural issue

× It's my birthday gifts.

✓ It was my birthday gift.

句中的 It 指一辆自行车,因此对应的礼物应使用单数 gift,而不是复数 gifts。可根据所指对象是一个还是多个来选择名词的单复数。

5: Past tense issue

× It's my birthday gifts.

✓ It was my birthday gift.

这句话是在回忆童年时收到自行车的事情,语境是过去,因此用 was 比 is 更合适。叙述过去的经历时,通常要把 be 动词改为过去式 was 或 were。

26: Sentence structure errors

× I think bikes.

✓ I think bikes are popular.

I think bikes 缺少完整的表达内容,听起来像未说完的句子。结合问题“你认为自行车在你们国家受欢迎吗?”,可以补上 are popular,使句子结构完整。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Almost every tribe have their own bike.

✓ Almost every tribe has its own bike.

every 后接单数名词 tribe,整个主语按单数处理,因此谓语动词应使用 has,而不是 have。为保持数的一致,也可将 its 与单数的 tribe 搭配使用。

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