Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike. When I was a child, I used to ride it with my friends in the evening and we used to play a different game, a different games with the bike. Uh, it was a lot of fun.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Bikes are much popular in a country within the children. Adults don't really use, uh, bikes for travelling, but children do ride bags for having fun playing different games.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “Yes, I did.” Avoid repeating “a different game,” and use a natural phrase such as “played different games on our bikes.” You can also remove “Uh” to make the response smoother.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike with my friends in the evenings, and we often played different games on our bikes. It was a lot of fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and use “popular among children,” rather than “popular ... within the children.” Say “bikes” instead of “bags,” and use “for fun” or “to play games” to express the purpose naturally. A specific contrast between children and adults will make your answer clearer.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular among children in my country. Many adults don’t use them for commuting, but children often ride them for fun and to play games with their friends.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike.

The question asks about the past, when you were a child, so the answer should use the past-tense auxiliary did rather than the present-tense auxiliary do.

1: Singular and plural issue

× When I was a child, I used to ride it with my friends in the evening and we used to play a different game, a different games with the bike.

✓ When I was a child, I used to ride it with my friends in the evening, and we used to play different games with the bike.

Different games is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article a. Avoid repeating the phrase with conflicting singular and plural forms; use different games.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Bikes are much popular in a country within the children.

✓ Bikes are very popular among children in my country.

Much does not normally modify the adjective popular in this positive statement. Use very popular. Much can be used with comparative forms, as in much more popular.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Bikes are much popular in a country within the children.

✓ Bikes are very popular among children in my country.

Within does not express the intended relationship here. Use among to refer to popularity in a group of people. The phrase in my country also clearly identifies the country being discussed.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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