Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 과거의 경험을 말하다가 현재의 선호로 갑자기 전환해 답변의 흐름이 어색합니다. ‘when I was seven’처럼 자연스럽게 표현하고, 당시 자전거를 어디에서 탔는지 또는 무엇이 즐거웠는지 구체적인 세부사항을 덧붙여 보세요. 현재도 자전거를 좋아한다는 내용은 과거 경험과 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and it was a lot of fun. I still enjoy riding bikes today.

Gợi ý: ‘many Korean many Koreans’는 반복되므로 ‘many Koreans’로 고치세요. 현재 자전거의 인기를 묻는 질문이므로 ‘used’ 대신 현재형 ‘use’를 사용해야 합니다. 운동을 좋아한다는 이유를 제시한 점은 좋지만, 자전거 도로를 이용하거나 주말에 타는 사람들이 많다는 식의 구체적인 예를 추가하고 연결어로 문장을 매끄럽게 이어 보세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in South Korea because many people enjoy exercising outdoors. For example, people often ride along riverside bike paths, especially on weekends.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was 7 and I love BIC bicycle today.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 7, and I love a BIC bicycle today.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article such as a. Use a before BIC bicycle when referring to one bicycle.

× Yes, because many Korean many Koreans love exercise.

✓ Yes, because many Koreans love exercise.

Many Korean is an abandoned, incomplete phrase before the repeated phrase many Koreans. Remove the false start to make the sentence clear and grammatical.

× So many people used bicycles.

✓ So many people use bicycles.

The sentence describes a general fact about bicycle use, so use the present tense use rather than the past tense used.