Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงก่อน เช่น “Yes, I did.” เหตุผลเรื่องขับรถไม่เกี่ยวกับคำถามและมีการพูดซ้ำ ควรแก้ “At the Pause” เป็น “When I was a child” และใช้ “ride a bike around my neighborhood” แทน “write a bike around my venue” นอกจากนี้ควรจบประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำว่า “I think”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It was a fun way to play with my friends after school.

Gợi ý: คำตอบมีจุดยืนและเหตุผล แต่ควรใช้คำให้เป็นธรรมชาติขึ้น เช่น “public transportation is very convenient” แทน “the process of the public transportation is very well” และควรใช้กาลปัจจุบันให้สอดคล้องกัน เช่น “people don’t like” แทน “people didn’t like” จัดเหตุผลให้กระชับและเชื่อมโยงกัน โดยกล่าวถึงความสะดวกของขนส่งสาธารณะและรถยนต์ส่วนตัวอย่างชัดเจน

Ví dụ: Not really. Public transportation is quite convenient in my country, so many people prefer taking buses or trains. Also, people who own cars often find them more comfortable than riding a bike.

× Of course, because I cannot drive a car before I learn to drive a car in the future.

✓ Of course, because I couldn't drive a car before I learned to drive one.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the past-tense modal couldn't is needed instead of cannot. Use couldn't to describe an inability in the past.

× Of course, because I cannot drive a car before I learn to drive a car in the future.

✓ Of course, because I couldn't drive a car before I learned to drive one.

Learn refers to an event in the past, so it should be learned. Keep the verb tenses consistent when describing past events.

× At the Pause, I really like to write a bike around my venue.

✓ At that age, I really liked riding a bike around my neighborhood.

The answer is about the student's childhood, so liked is the appropriate past-tense form. Use past tense when describing a habit or preference from an earlier period.

× I think it's very fun and I think it's very.

✓ I think it's very fun.

The final clause ends with very, which requires an adjective or adverb to complete the idea. Remove the incomplete repetition or finish it with a suitable word, such as fun.

× Not really, because in my country they have a lot of public transportation and I think the process of the public transportation is very well.

✓ Not really, because there is a lot of public transportation in my country, and I think public transportation works very well.

Use there is to introduce the amount of uncountable public transportation available. The phrase there is a lot of is the appropriate there-be construction here.

× Not really, because in my country they have a lot of public transportation and I think the process of the public transportation is very well.

✓ Not really, because there is a lot of public transportation in my country, and I think public transportation works very well.

Well is an adverb that describes how something works, so it should modify the verb works. Saying is very well is incorrect in this context; use works very well.

× So people didn't like to ride a bike so much in my country, and they have their own car, so I think it's more comfortable.

✓ So people don't like riding bikes very much in my country, and they have their own cars, so I think cars are more comfortable.

The answer describes the current popularity of bikes, so use the present-tense auxiliary don't rather than the past-tense didn't.

× So people didn't like to ride a bike so much in my country, and they have their own car, so I think it's more comfortable.

✓ So people don't like riding bikes very much in my country, and they have their own cars, so I think cars are more comfortable.

People refers to multiple individuals, so car should be pluralized to cars when referring to the cars they own. Make the noun's number agree with the meaning.