Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the past tense: “Yes, I did.” The phrase “Yes I do, had” mixes present and past tense, and “I needs a convenience” is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Explain that you needed a convenient way to travel to school after moving to high school. Avoid repeating “house” and “school,” and use a linking word such as “so” to connect the reason to your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I started using it to get to school when I moved to high school. It was a convenient way to travel there.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and gives examples, but “basic conveyance” sounds unnatural here; say “a common way to get around” or “a popular form of transport.” Remove the repeated phrase “for a regular commute” and the fillers, and make the examples flow logically. You could mention commuters and schoolchildren in one concise supporting sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re a common way for people to commute to work, especially in busy areas. Many schoolchildren also ride them because they’re affordable and convenient.

× Yes I do, had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so the answer should use the past-tense auxiliary did, not the present-tense do. Add I before had to make it a complete sentence.

× Initially I had a bicycle and then 'cause when I moved to high school, I needs a convenience to travel to my house, to my school.

✓ Initially, I had a bicycle, and when I moved to high school, I needed a convenient way to travel from my house to school.

The sentence describes a past situation, indicated by had and moved, so needs should be changed to needed. Needed a convenient way is also a natural grammatical phrasing for expressing that you required transportation.

× Initially I had a bicycle and then 'cause when I moved to high school, I needs a convenience to travel to my house, to my school.

✓ Initially, I had a bicycle, and when I moved to high school, I needed a convenient way to travel from my house to school.

The subject is I, which does not take the third-person singular verb ending -s. In this past-time context, use needed, not needs.