Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think maybe yes, to be honest, I used to have a bag when I were a child. I thought riding back was very interesting and.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 你只是重复了考官的问题,没有给出自己的回答。请先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、骑车地点或学骑车的经历。注意说“when you were a child”,不能漏掉冠词“a”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答与问题相关的内容不足:“I used to have a bag”可能想表达“我小时候有一辆自行车”,而“when I were”应改为“when I was”。请明确说明自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎,并给出具体原因或例子。句子也没有说完;尽量用完整、简洁的句子结束回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live near their workplaces. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around. When I was a child, I enjoyed riding my bike with my friends.
× Did you have a bike when you were child?
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
“child”是可数名词单数,前面需要加冠词。这里应使用不定冠词“a”,所以说“a child”。
× I think maybe yes, to be honest, I used to have a bag when I were a child.
✓ I think maybe yes, to be honest, I used to have a bag when I was a child.
主语是“I”,过去时中应搭配“was”,而不是“were”。建议记住:过去时中“I/he/she/it”通常搭配“was”,“you/we/they”搭配“were”。
× I thought riding back was very interesting and.
✓ I thought riding back was very interesting.
句子以并列连词“and”结尾,但后面没有接续的并列内容,导致句子结构不完整。若没有后续内容,应删去“and”。