Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Відповідь прямо відповідає на запитання, але численні паузи й самовиправлення ускладнюють розуміння. Використовуйте правильні форми: «my parents gave me this bike» замість «present me this gift» і «I fell» замість «I fault». Для велосипеда доречніше сказати «ride», а не «drive». Додайте одну конкретну деталь про велосипед або про те, де ви каталися.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I still remember the day my parents gave it to me—it was my first bike. I fell a few times while learning to ride, but I soon got the hang of it.

Gợi ý: Ви відповідаєте прямо, але повторюєте «definitely» і «popular», а пояснення звучить нечітко. Зазначте конкретну причину популярності велосипедів, наприклад їхню доступність, зручність або популярність серед дітей. Використовуйте природні конструкції: «as children» або «many parents buy bikes for their children».

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many parents buy them for their kids because they are fun and relatively affordable. Adults also use bikes for exercise or short trips.

× ...my parents present me this gift...

✓ ...my parents presented me with this gift...

The sentence refers to an event in the past, so use the past-tense verb presented. The phrase present someone with something is also the appropriate grammatical construction here.

× I fault of course, because I can't normally drive.

✓ I fell, of course, because I couldn't ride the bike properly.

Use the past-tense form fell to describe what happened when you were a child. Because the inability is also described in the past, use couldn't rather than can't. Ride is more appropriate than drive when talking about riding a bike.

× In the childhood, parents gave umm, uh, bike to uh, some children and it's really popular thing definitely.

✓ In childhood, parents gave a bike to some children, and it was definitely a really popular thing.

When referring to childhood in general, do not use the definite article the. Use the past tense gave and was to keep the verbs consistent with the past-time reference.

× In the childhood, parents gave umm, uh, bike to uh, some children and it's really popular thing definitely.

✓ In childhood, parents gave a bike to some children, and it was definitely a really popular thing.

Bike and thing are singular countable nouns, so each needs an article. Use a before bike and a before really popular thing.