Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I have a pie when I was when I was a try. Oh, I really love that pie because I can uh, uh, go around by also make me have more unpackable, memorably memory.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my stupid step, I didn't buy a popular in my country because the young used them for to go forward or hang out with train frequently. I think it's a strange spot.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời có, nhưng nhiều từ bị phát âm hoặc dùng sai khiến ý chính khó hiểu (ví dụ “pie” thay vì “bike”). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu hoàn chỉnh ở thì quá khứ, sau đó nêu một lý do hoặc kỷ niệm cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và dùng từ đệm như “uh”; có thể nói “ride around” và “make happy memories”.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, especially with my friends after school. It gave me a lot of freedom and happy memories.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hiện chưa nêu rõ xe đạp có phổ biến hay không, và một số cụm từ như “In my stupid step”, “go forward” và “hang out with train” không phù hợp hoặc khó hiểu. Hãy bắt đầu bằng ý kiến rõ ràng, chẳng hạn “Yes, they are quite popular”, rồi giải thích ai sử dụng xe đạp và để làm gì. Dùng từ nối như “because” và đưa ra một chi tiết cụ thể; không cần thêm câu kết không rõ nghĩa.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They often ride them to nearby places or use them to meet up with friends. However, many people prefer motorbikes for longer journeys.
× Yeah, I have a pie when I was when I was a try.
✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.
The answer refers to having a bike during childhood, a completed period in the past, so use the past-tense verb had rather than have. Use was consistently for the past-time clause.
× I really love that pie because I can uh, uh, go around by also make me have more unpackable, memorably memory.
✓ I really loved that bike because I could go around, and it also gave me more memorable experiences.
The speaker is describing a childhood experience, so use the past forms loved and could. The second clause also needs a past-tense verb to keep the time reference consistent.
× ...go around by also make me have more unpackable, memorably memory.
✓ ...go around, and it also gave me more memorable experiences.
The original joins clauses without a clear grammatical structure: by cannot correctly connect go around with make me have here. Use and to join the clauses, and give the second clause its own subject and verb.
× In my stupid step, I didn't buy a popular in my country because the young used them for to go forward or hang out with train frequently.
✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because young people use them to get around or hang out with friends.
The question asks about a general present-day situation, so use present-tense forms such as are and use rather than past-tense didn't and used.
× ...used them for to go forward...
✓ ...use them to get around...
Do not use for before the infinitive to go in this construction. Use use something to do something: use them to get around.