Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. When I was in elementary school, I was I was really thrilled. It's because my parents bought it for me and also every time I was writing it made me so much excited every I allowed

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Uh personally I think it is. In Japan, it has many hills, uphill and downhill. So when it comes to bike I think electric bicycle is more popular than like a regular bicycle because it makes us

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or memory. Avoid repeating words and correct the unnatural phrases: say “riding it,” not “writing it,” and “it made me feel excited.” Your response trails off, so finish the idea and keep it to a few complete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was in elementary school, and I was thrilled. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly and support it with a complete explanation. Use “bicycles” or “bikes” consistently, and say “Japan has many hills” rather than “it has many hills.” Complete your final thought by explaining how electric bikes help people, and avoid fillers such as “like.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Japan, especially electric bikes. Many areas have steep hills, so an electric bike makes it easier to get around than a regular one. They’re particularly useful for commuting and carrying shopping.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Every time I was writing it made me so much excited.

✓ Every time I rode it, it made me so excited.

Use the simple past rode for a repeated action in the past. Was writing is a progressive form and does not fit this habitual meaning. In this context, writing also appears to be a mistaken word for riding.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It made me so much excited.

✓ It made me so excited.

Excited is an adjective, so use so to modify it. Much does not normally modify this adjective in this construction.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, personally, I think it is.

✓ Uh, personally, I think they are.

The question asks about bikes, which is plural, so use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are rather than it is.

1: Singular and plural issue

× When it comes to bike, I think electric bicycle is more popular than like a regular bicycle.

✓ When it comes to bikes, I think electric bicycles are more popular than regular bicycles.

Use the plural bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Keep the comparison parallel by using plural forms for both types: electric bicycles and regular bicycles. Remove like here because it is an unnecessary filler, not part of the comparison.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Excited— Thrilled; Aroused
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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