Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。你提到了自行车的颜色、和朋友骑车以及它是童年礼物，但“my mom sent me a bag on its orange”和“they have two balls”表达不清楚；如果想说妈妈给你买了一辆橙色、带两个辅助轮的自行车，可以使用“bought me an orange bike with training wheels”。注意过去经历要统一使用过去时，例如“rode”“was”，并把“a best gift”改为“one of the best gifts”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, my mum bought me an orange bike with training wheels. I often rode it around the neighbourhood with my friends, so it was one of my favourite childhood gifts.

Gợi ý: 回答是否流行后，说明原因并给出清晰、具体的解释。你提到天气寒冷，但“My country is hard”和“stride back to”用词不准确；可以说“the weather is cold”以及“people don’t often cycle to work or school”。最后的“but in childhood it's made popular”意思不清，也与前面缺少衔接。请明确区分成年人和儿童，例如说明成年人较少骑车通勤，但孩子仍会骑车娱乐。

Ví dụ: Not particularly. It’s often cold in my country, so many people prefer to drive or take public transport to work and school. However, bikes are still popular with children, who often ride them for fun.

× Yes, when in primary school my mom sent me a bag on its orange and they have two balls.

✓ Yes. When I was in primary school, my mom gave me a bike. It was orange and had two wheels.

“when in primary school”缺少主语和 be 动词，应为“When I was in primary school”。后面的“they”与单数的“bike”不一致，应改为“it”；讲述童年经历时，“have”应使用过去式“had”。原句中关于物品的表达不清楚，因此按上下文将其整理为“a bike ... orange ... two wheels”。

× I always ride that bike with my friends.

✓ I always rode that bike with my friends.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，语境是过去，因此一般过去时“rode”比一般现在时“ride”合适。

× That's funny, and I think it's always a best gift in my childhood life.

✓ That was fun, and I think it was the best gift of my childhood.

句子谈论童年时收到的礼物，应使用过去时“was”。“best”是最高级，前面通常用定冠词“the”，不能说“a best”。

× People don't always stride back to, uh, for job or school, but in childhood it's made popular.

✓ People don't always ride bikes to work or school, but bikes are popular among children.

“it's made popular”使用了不自然的被动结构，而且“it”指代不清。这里是在说明自行车在孩子中受欢迎，用主动系表结构“bikes are popular among children”更合适。“job”在此处表示去上班的目的地时通常说“work”，而不是“for job”。