Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike. I love this bike because it's interesting. It's a memory in children part, so I love it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think. It's popular in 20 years ago because in China 20 years ago it wanted not rich.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 直接回答过去的情况时使用过去时:用“I had a bike”,而不是“I have a bike”。“interesting”和“a memory in children part”表达不自然,也没有说明自行车具体有什么特别之处。可以补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、骑车的经历,或它为什么让你难忘。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends. I still remember how excited I felt when I first learned to ride it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答问题中的“现在”——例如说明自行车目前是否受欢迎。原回答主要谈到二十年前,且“it wanted not rich”语法和含义都不清楚。可以用“because”解释原因,并用具体情况支持观点,例如通勤、健身或电动自行车的普及;谈过去时使用过去时态。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are still popular in China, especially in big cities. Many people ride them for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. E-bikes are also common, as they help people travel farther without much effort.
× Yes, I have a bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
问题问的是你小时候有没有自行车,时间背景是过去,因此应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had。
× It's a memory in children part.
✓ It's a memory from my childhood.
这里的 in 不能自然地表达“来自童年的回忆”,而 children part 也不是正确的英语表达。可以说 from my childhood,表示“来自我的童年”。
× It's popular in 20 years ago.
✓ It was popular 20 years ago.
20 years ago 指过去的时间,因此应使用一般过去时 was,而不是现在时 is。另外,表示“在……年前”时,ago 前不需要加 in。
× It's popular in 20 years ago.
✓ It was popular 20 years ago.
表示“……年前”时,直接使用时间表达加 ago,不在前面加 in。例如:20 years ago。
× because in China 20 years ago it wanted not rich.
✓ because China was not rich 20 years ago.
原句语序不自然,且 it wanted not rich 不能表达“中国当时不富裕”。可将 China 放在从句主语位置,并用 was not rich 表示过去的状态。