Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. Actually, my parents bought a blue bike for me when I was kid. Uh, and uh, the bike have two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. With the rapid development of society, you know, more and more people thinking has improvement.. They realize that riding bikes is a healthy way.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容切题,也提到了自行车的颜色和辅助轮,但需要改进时态、名词和动词搭配。谈过去的经历时,应将“have”改为“had”,并说“when I was a kid”;“wells”应为“wheels”,这里更准确的说法是“training wheels”;“help me keeping”应改为“help me keep”。减少“uh”等填充词,并用一两句完整的话表达即可。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a blue bike when I was a kid, and it had training wheels to help me keep my balance.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 开头直接回答了问题,也给出了健康这一理由,但“社会快速发展”与自行车受欢迎之间的联系不够清楚。“more and more people thinking has improvement”语法不正确,可改为“more and more people are becoming health-conscious”。建议删去“you know”,并补充具体例子,例如人们骑车通勤或锻炼;同时使用“because”或“for example”让理由更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. More people are becoming health-conscious, and cycling is an easy way to exercise. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use shared bikes for short trips.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,使用一般过去时“Did you have...?”回答时应使用助动词“did”,不能用现在完成时的“have”。回答过去时的一般疑问句时,可用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”
× Actually, my parents bought a blue bike for me when I was kid.
✓ Actually, my parents bought a blue bike for me when I was a kid.
“kid”是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里应说“a kid”。记住:单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。
× The bike have two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.
✓ The bike has two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.
主语“The bike”是第三人称单数,一般现在时的谓语动词“have”应变为“has”。注意第三人称单数主语后,动词通常要加“-s”或“-es”。
× The bike have two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.
✓ The bike have two extra wells that can help me keep balance.
“help + 人”后面通常接动词原形,因此应说“help me keep”,不能说“help me keeping”。口语中的“keeping”是未完成的自我修正,整理答案时应删去。
× With the rapid development of society, you know, more and more people thinking has improvement.
✓ With the rapid development of society, you know, more and more people's thinking has improved.
原句的主语结构不完整。“people thinking”应改为表示所属关系的“people's thinking”;此外,“has”后应接动词的过去分词,表达“已经改善”时应说“has improved”,不能使用名词“improvement”。