Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, but that is for adults.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, at the 80s channel everybody will buy a car when they become adults for walking.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了“Yes”,但后半句与问题的时间和内容不够清楚:“that”指什么?如果你小时候有自行车,请说明它是否适合儿童,并补充一个具体细节,例如颜色、骑车地点或使用频率。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about eight. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 请围绕“自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎”直接作答。原回答中的“at the 80s channel”和“for walking”表达不清,也从自行车转到了汽车。可以说明哪些人常骑自行车、通常在哪里骑,或将自行车与汽车作简短比较,并使用清晰的连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They are convenient for short trips, and they help people avoid traffic.
× Yes, at the 80s channel everybody will buy a car when they become adults for walking.
✓ Yes, in the 80s, everybody bought a car when they became an adult.
表示“在20世纪80年代”时,时间介词应使用 in,而不是 at。建议记住:表示年份、月份或年代时通常用 in。
× Yes, at the 80s channel everybody will buy a car when they become adults for walking.
✓ Yes, in the 80s, everybody bought a car when they became an adult.
句子提到的是过去的“20世纪80年代”,所以描述当时的行为应使用过去时 bought;when 引导的时间从句也应使用过去时 became。注意,everybody 通常视为单数,因此可说 when everybody became an adult。