Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was a child I had a bug. It was heavy and beautiful uh colors on it. So I love it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think in my own country most people uh like more uh cars than uh bikes because bikes are uh bikes are uh tiri- uh boring for people who want to uh go to office or uh go uh other places.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use the correct word “bike” rather than “bug.” Describe its colour or another memorable feature with a natural phrase such as “it had a beautiful colour.” Avoid filler words like “uh,” and add a brief detail explaining why you liked it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite heavy, but it had a lovely blue colour. I enjoyed riding it around my neighbourhood, so I have fond memories of it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer about whether bikes are popular, then explain the preference for cars. Replace “like more cars than bikes” with “prefer cars to bikes,” and say “go to the office” or “travel to other places.” Avoid repeating words and fillers; support your point with a specific reason, such as comfort or distance.

Ví dụ: Bikes are less popular than cars in my country, especially for commuting. Many people prefer cars because they are more comfortable and convenient for travelling longer distances. However, bikes are still popular for short trips and exercise.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× It was heavy and beautiful uh colors on it.

✓ It was heavy and had beautiful colors on it.

The original sentence joins 'was heavy' with 'beautiful colors on it' without a grammatical structure connecting them. Add 'had' to make the second idea a complete clause: 'It was heavy and had beautiful colors on it.'

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× I think in my own country most people uh like more uh cars than uh bikes.

✓ I think that in my country most people like cars more than bikes.

In this comparison, 'more' should follow the verb and the object being compared. Use 'like cars more than bikes,' not 'like more cars than bikes.'

22: Article errors

× Bikes are boring for people who want to go to office.

✓ Bikes are boring for people who want to go to the office.

In this context, 'office' is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use 'the office' when referring to the usual workplace or office.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Bikes are boring for people who want to go other places.

✓ Bikes are boring for people who want to go to other places.

The verb 'go' needs the preposition 'to' before 'other places' when indicating a destination.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Beautiful— Attractive
Boring— Tedious
Heavy— Weighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
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