Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答切题，也提供了和父亲骑车、母亲拍照的具体细节。注意讲过去的经历时要统一使用过去时：将“have”改为“had”，将“ride”改为“rode”。“took photo for us”不够自然，可说“took photos of us”。此外，原句用多个“and”连接，略显冗长，可以拆分成两句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around the garden with my father, while my mother took photos of us.

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题，但主要描述的是童年时身边朋友的情况，缺少关于自行车在整个国家是否流行的说明。可以先概括目前自行车受欢迎的原因，再补充一个具体例子。注意“my friend around me”应改为“my friends”或“my friends around me”，“also”和“too”不必同时使用；谈过去的经历时，“ride”应改为“rode”，且应说“rode bikes”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re affordable and convenient in busy cities. When I was a child, many of my friends had bikes, and we often rode them together.

× I have a bike when I was a child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child

句子描述的是童年时的情况，时间明确发生在过去，因此 have 应使用过去式 had。建议根据时间状语 when I was a child 使用过去时。

× I often ride a bike in the garden with my father

✓ I often rode a bike in the garden with my father

这里描述的是小时候经常做的事情，属于过去的习惯，因此 ride 应改为过去式 rode。

× my mother took photo for us

✓ my mother took a photo of us

photo 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词，因此应加 a。另外，表达“给我们拍照”时，常用 take a photo of us。

× We often ride bike together in our garden

✓ We often rode bikes together in our garden

这句话承接“When I was a child”，描述过去的习惯，所以 ride 应改为 rode。表示一起骑车时，泛指多辆自行车可用复数 bikes。

× We often ride bike together in our garden

✓ We often rode bikes together in our garden

bike 是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词；这里表达泛指骑自行车，更自然的说法是用复数 bikes。