Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a li- a green one and I used to ride it every afternoon around many blue hood and I learned to ride without training wheels around when I was four years old.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in Marikina, where the city has built dedicated bike lanes. Many people cycle there because it is cheaper than driving and the government encourages it for good exercise and it also helps them avoid traffic congesti congestion.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Avoid restarting words such as “li-,” and replace “many blue hood” with the place you mean, such as “my neighborhood.” Use a natural phrase like “when I was about four” rather than “around when I was four years old.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a green bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I learned to ride without training wheels when I was about four.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: You give a clear opinion and relevant reasons. Improve the answer by splitting the long final sentence and avoiding the repeated/stumbled word “congesti congestion.” Also, say “the government promotes cycling as a form of exercise” for more natural phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think they are quite popular, especially in Marikina, where the city has built dedicated bike lanes. Cycling is cheaper than driving, and it helps people avoid traffic. The government also promotes it as a good form of exercise.

Ngữ pháp

1: Singular and plural issue

× I used to ride it every afternoon around many blue hood.

✓ I used to ride it every afternoon around many blue hoods.

The quantifier many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Hood is singular, so it should be hoods. If you meant your local area, say around my neighborhood instead.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I learned to ride without training wheels around when I was four years old.

✓ I learned to ride without training wheels when I was four years old.

Around is unnecessary before the time clause when I was four years old. Use when directly to state the age at which you learned to ride.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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