Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I remember that it's a ride bike which which my dad better for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Umm, we usually use the bike as our vehicle and we have a lot of shared bicycle.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答有回应问题,但后半句语法和表达不清楚,听者难以判断你想说什么。请用过去时说明父亲给你买了什么样的自行车,并补充一个具体细节,例如你常在哪里骑或骑车时的感受。注意用“a bike that my dad bought for me”表达“爸爸给我买的自行车”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red one that my dad bought for me, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,也提到了共享单车,但“use the bike as our vehicle”不够自然,而且“bicycle”应使用复数。可以说明自行车为什么受欢迎,并举出共享单车或通勤的具体例子。尽量减少“Umm”等填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and help them avoid traffic.
× Yes, of course I remember that it's a ride bike which which my dad better for me.
✓ Yes, of course. I remember that it was a bike that my dad bought for me.
这句话描述的是童年时的自行车,属于过去的事情,因此应将“it's”改为过去式“it was”。“better”在这里应为“bought”(buy 的过去式),表示爸爸当时给我买了自行车。回答过去经历时,注意使用过去时态。
× Yes, of course. Umm, we usually use the bike as our vehicle and we have a lot of shared bicycle.
✓ Yes, of course. Umm, we usually use bikes as our vehicles, and we have a lot of shared bicycles.
“a lot of”后面应接可数名词复数,因此“bicycle”应改为“bicycles”。这里泛指人们通常使用的自行车和交通工具,用复数“bikes”和“vehicles”更合适。注意可数名词在表示多个事物时通常需要加复数词尾。