Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was a child I had a bike. My grandmother, uh, had bought it for me for my birthday.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

In my country bikes are not that famous because there are not so much bicycle paths, so people prefer to use the car to go around but last month I was in Copenhagen and it was the most bicycle friend city

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: Rispondi subito, evitando di ripetere “when I was a child”. Elimina l’esitazione “uh” e usa il past simple (“bought”), perché non è necessario il past perfect in questo contesto. Puoi aggiungere un dettaglio concreto su come usavi la bici.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My grandmother bought me a bike for my birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Esprimi la tua opinione in modo diretto e organizza le idee con un connettivo, per esempio “because” e “however”. Correggi “not so much bicycle paths” in “not many bike paths”, “go around” in “get around” e “bicycle friend city” in “bike-friendly city”. Specifica anche il contrasto tra il tuo Paese e Copenaghen; dividi la risposta in frasi per evitare una frase troppo lunga.

Ví dụ: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country because there aren’t many bike paths, so most people drive to get around. However, I visited Copenhagen last month, and it was the most bike-friendly city I’ve ever seen.

Ngữ pháp

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× In my country bikes are not that famous because there are not so much bicycle paths, so people prefer to use the car to go around but last month I was in Copenhagen and it was the most bicycle friend city

✓ In my country bikes are not that famous because there are not so many bicycle paths, so people prefer to use the car to go around. But last month I was in Copenhagen, and it was the most bicycle-friendly city.

Bicycle paths are countable plural nouns, so use many rather than much. Use many with plural countable nouns and much with uncountable nouns.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× In my country bikes are not that famous because there are not so much bicycle paths, so people prefer to use the car to go around but last month I was in Copenhagen and it was the most bicycle friend city

✓ In my country bikes are not that famous because there are not so many bicycle paths, so people prefer to use the car to go around. But last month I was in Copenhagen, and it was the most bicycle-friendly city.

Bicycle friend is not the correct adjective phrase. Use bicycle-friendly to describe a city that is suitable for or welcoming to cyclists. The hyphen joins the words to form a compound adjective before city.

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