Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I got a bike when I was eight years old from my parents. I often used it to go to the park and play with my friend.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Absolutely yes. In our country, almost every child had got a bike when they're when they was young, and many adults like ride a bike to practice.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,也补充了买车时间和用途,结构清楚。注意语序更自然地说“my parents gave it to me”,并将“play with my friend”改为“play with my friends”或具体说明和谁一起玩。可以再加入一个具体细节,例如骑车的频率或感受,让回答更生动。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me my first bike when I was eight. I often rode it to the park after school and played with my friends there. I really enjoyed having that freedom.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 观点明确,但后半部分有多处时态和语法错误:“had got”不适合这里,“they're when they was”重复且主谓不一致,“like ride”应改为“like riding”。回答现在也缺少具体原因或例子。建议用现在时描述普遍情况,并补充骑车的用途,例如锻炼或通勤。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children learn to ride one when they’re young, and lots of adults cycle for exercise or to get around. For example, I often see people riding along the riverside at weekends.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue(现在时错误)

× In our country, almost every child had got a bike when they're when they was young, and many adults like ride a bike to practice.

✓ In our country, almost every child gets a bike when they are young, and many adults like riding bikes for exercise.

这里描述的是国家里普遍存在的情况,应使用一般现在时。将“had got”改为“gets”,并把重复且时态混乱的“when they're when they was young”改为“when they are young”。描述普遍事实时,请保持时态一致。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors(主谓一致错误)

× they was young

✓ they are young

主语“they”是复数,不能与“was”搭配。这里描述普遍情况,应使用“they are”。注意根据主语选择相应的动词形式。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词后接 -ing 形式错误)

× many adults like ride a bike to practice

✓ many adults like riding bikes for exercise

“like”后面可以接动词的 -ing 形式,因此应将“ride”改为“riding”。这里“for exercise”表示“为了锻炼身体”,比“to practice”更自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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