Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. I think I have never had a bad a bike when I was a child, so usually I'll take my brothers.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think so because it's like almost, yes, every Rd. of this country, almost 90% of them are beautiful cars and trucks and, uh.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否拥有自行车,再用过去时补充说明。原回答中的“have never had a bad a bike”和“take my brothers”表达不清;如果你想说借哥哥的自行车,可以说“borrowed my brother’s bike”。避免重复“I think”,并使用过去时。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child. I sometimes borrowed my brother’s bike, though, and we would ride around our neighborhood together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车是否普及,再用清楚、相关的理由支持观点。原回答中“almost, yes”等填充词较多,“90%”指代不明,而且句子没有说完。可以说明道路上汽车和卡车很多,并补充这对骑行造成的影响;不要使用无法确认的具体数据。
Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There are many cars and trucks on the roads, so cycling can feel unsafe, especially in busy areas. However, some people still ride bikes for exercise or short trips.
× I think I have never had a bad a bike when I was a child.
✓ I don't think I ever had a bike when I was a child.
“When I was a child”指的是已经结束的过去时间,不适合用现在完成时“have never had”。这里应使用一般过去时“had”。
× I think I have never had a bad a bike when I was a child.
✓ I don't think I ever had a bike when I was a child.
“a bad a bike”中出现了重复的冠词“a”,而且“bad”在这里不符合句意。表达“有一辆自行车”时直接说“a bike”即可。
× So usually I'll take my brothers.
✓ So I usually borrowed my brothers' bikes.
这句话描述的是童年时经常发生的事情,应使用一般过去时。将“I'll take”改为“I usually borrowed”。另外,借用的是兄弟们的自行车,因此用“my brothers' bikes”表达更清楚。
× I don't think so because it's like almost, yes, every Rd. of this country, almost 90% of them are beautiful cars and trucks.
✓ I don't think so, because almost every road in this country is filled with beautiful cars and trucks.
原句中“every road”和“almost 90% of them are beautiful cars and trucks”被不完整地连接在一起,导致句子结构混乱。可以用“almost every road in this country is filled with...”完整表达“这个国家几乎每条路上都有……”的意思。