Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

To be honest, uh, I have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bike are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people. They have enough time to spare or traveled. For example, many, uh, many students use their bike.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,但过去的经历要用过去时,应该说 “I had a bike”。删掉不必要的 “uh”,并补充一个具体细节,例如你通常在哪里骑车或骑车做什么。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并注意主谓一致和搭配:用 “bikes are popular in my country”,不要说 “among our country”;“China” 前不需要加 “our”。原因与骑车的联系不够清楚,“spare or traveled”也不自然。可以说明骑车方便、便宜或环保,并用一个具体场景举例。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially among students. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, so many students ride them to school or to nearby shops.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× To be honest, uh, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, uh, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”明确表示过去,因此主句动词也要用过去时。“have”的过去式是“had”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× Yes, bike are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数“bikes”,而不是单数“bike”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, bike are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people.

✓ Yes, bike are very popular in our country because our China has lots of young people.

“among”通常表示“在多个群体或个体之中”,不适合搭配“country”。表达“在我国”应使用“in our country”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× They have enough time to spare or traveled.

✓ They have enough time to spare or travel.

“spare”和“travel”由“or”连接,形式应保持平行。这里“to”可以同时支配两个动词,因此应使用动词原形“travel”,不能使用过去式“traveled”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× For example, many, uh, many students use their bike.

✓ For example, many, uh, many students use their bikes.

“many students”表示多个学生,通常对应多个学生各自的自行车,因此“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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