Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Uh, in my kindergarten, uh, I certainly have a bike and it's ride, ride and, and for me, uh, the red bag is the most beautiful bike in the world. And it was.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I think bikes are popular in the past, um, and then uh with technology development, uh, the car are more famous in our daily life and more people are prefer joining cars or work or work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再补充一个具体细节。描述童年经历时使用过去时,例如“had”“rode”;注意“ride”应根据语法改为“rode”。避免重复和过多填充词。原回答中的“red bag”含义不清,如果想说自行车是红色的,可以说“a red bike”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a red bike when I was in kindergarten. I loved riding it because I thought it was the most beautiful bike in the world.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车现在是否受欢迎,再用过去与现在的对比解释原因。注意题目询问现在的情况,应使用一般现在时;“cars are more famous”和“people are prefer joining cars”不自然,可改为“cars are more popular”和“more people prefer driving”。补充一个具体原因,例如汽车更方便或通勤距离较远。
Ví dụ: Bikes are still popular in my country, especially for short trips. However, cars have become more common because they are convenient for commuting and bad weather.
× In my kindergarten, I certainly have a bike.
✓ When I was in kindergarten, I certainly had a bike.
这句话描述的是童年时的经历,应该使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”;表达“上幼儿园时”时,用“When I was in kindergarten”更合适。
× It's ride, ride and, and for me, the red bag is the most beautiful bike in the world.
✓ I rode it, and to me, the red bike was the most beautiful bike in the world.
语境是在回忆童年,因此动词应使用过去时:“ride”改为“rode”,“is”改为“was”。此外,“it's ride”不能构成正确的动词短语;这里表达骑车的动作,可说“I rode it”。
× In my kindergarten, I certainly have a bike.
✓ When I was in kindergarten, I certainly had a bike.
表示在幼儿园上学或处于幼儿园阶段时,通常说“in kindergarten”,而不是“in my kindergarten”。可以用“When I was in kindergarten”完整、自然地表达“我上幼儿园时”。
× I think bikes are popular in the past.
✓ I think bikes were popular in the past.
“in the past”指过去的时间,因此描述过去的流行情况要用过去时“were”,而不是现在时“are”。
× With technology development, the car are more famous in our daily life.
✓ With the development of technology, cars are more popular in our daily lives.
这里应说“the development of technology”,在“development”前加定冠词“the”,并用“of”引出其内容。“cars”泛指汽车时通常不加“the”。
× The car are more famous in our daily life.
✓ Cars are more popular in our daily lives.
这里泛指汽车这一类事物,应使用复数“cars”,不能用单数“car”。“cars”与复数动词“are”搭配。
× More people are prefer joining cars or work or work.
✓ More people prefer driving cars to walking or cycling.
一般现在时的动词“prefer”前不需要加“are”,因此不能说“are prefer”。表达“更喜欢做某事而不是做另一件事”时,可使用“prefer doing A to doing B”的结构。