Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I did, uh, first I had a small bike with training wheels and little. I learned how to ride A2 wheeled like bike on my own. I remember it was very exciting because I felt more independent.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it's very popular because nowadays people are, uh, more like to chasing for a low carbon dioxide lifestyle. So more and more people try, uh, be start to ride a bike to commute commute.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再按时间顺序补充经历。注意表达“带辅助轮的小自行车”可以说“a small bike with training wheels”;“两轮自行车”应说“a two-wheeled bike”,不要说“A2 wheeled like bike”。删去不完整的“and little”,并减少“uh”等填充词,让句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I started with a small bike with training wheels, and later I learned to ride a two-wheeled bike on my own. I remember feeling excited because it gave me a sense of independence.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答时注意主谓一致:谈论自行车时用“they are popular”。表达“更倾向于选择低碳生活方式”可说“are choosing a low-carbon lifestyle”,而不是“more like to chasing”。说明人们骑车通勤时用“ride bikes to commute”,避免重复“commute”。可以补充一个具体原因,如减少排放或避开交通拥堵。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. More people are choosing a low-carbon lifestyle, so they ride bikes to work or school. Cycling is also a convenient way to avoid traffic jams.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yeah, I did, uh, first I had a small bike with training wheels and little.

✓ Yeah, I did. First, I had a small bike with training wheels when I was little.

原句中的“and little”没有构成完整、清晰的语法结构。这里可用“when I was little”表达“我小时候”,并将两个完整意思分开,句子会更清楚。

26: Sentence structure errors

× I learned how to ride A2 wheeled like bike on my own.

✓ I learned how to ride a two-wheeled bike on my own.

“A2 wheeled like bike”不是正确的英语结构。表示“两个轮子的自行车”时,应使用“a two-wheeled bike”;“two-wheeled”作为复合形容词放在名词“bike”前。

8: Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I think it's very popular because nowadays people are, uh, more like to chasing for a low carbon dioxide lifestyle.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular because nowadays people are more likely to pursue a low-carbon lifestyle.

“be likely to”中的“to”是不定式标记,后面应接动词原形,因此不能说“to chasing”。应改为“to pursue”。另外,“more like”在这里不能表达“更有可能”,应使用“more likely”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× So more and more people try, uh, be start to ride a bike to commute commute.

✓ So more and more people try to start riding a bike to commute.

“try”后可接“to + 动词原形”,因此应说“try to start”,不能说“try be start”。“start”后可接动名词“riding”。末尾重复的“commute”应删除。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Exciting— Thrilling; Arousing
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Low— Short; Cheap; Scarce; Inferior; Humble
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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