Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 0.0

Gợi ý: 你重复了考官的问题,没有回答。请直接说明小时候有没有自行车,再补充一个具体细节,例如是谁买的、你在哪里骑,或你是否喜欢骑车。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 你给出了明确观点,但后一句与前一句重复表达“自行车很受欢迎”。“such as”后面应接例子或名词短语;这里可以改用“for example”说明具体场景。另外,“use bike”应改为“use bikes”或“ride bikes”,“on the park”应为“in the park”。建议用一两个具体细节支撑观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think they’re quite popular, especially in cities. For example, many young people ride bikes in parks or use shared bikes to get around because they’re convenient and affordable.

Ngữ pháp

16: Incorrect conjunction use

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many young people always use bikes in the park.

“Such as”通常用于引出名词或名词短语,不能直接引出“many young people always use...”这样的完整句子。这里可以用“For example”引出例子。

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many young people always use bikes in the park.

这里泛指年轻人使用的自行车,应使用复数“bikes”,而不是单数“bike”。表达一般类别时,常用复数名词。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many young people always use bikes in the park.

表示在公园内部活动时,通常用介词“in”,所以应说“in the park”,而不是“on the park”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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