Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. My uncle purchased me a bike and I really like driving it in my childhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Definitely it's quite popular. There are many young people like riding bikes and some travel city traveling cities they uh provide the bikes for
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,但有几处搭配和时态错误:“purchased me a bike”应改为“bought me a bike”,“driving it”应改为“riding it”;描述童年经历时,用过去时“liked”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如你常在哪里骑车。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My uncle bought me a bike when I was about eight, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 表达了明确观点,但后面的句子不完整且意思不清。注意主谓一致:可以说“Bikes are quite popular”。接着用一到两个具体理由或例子展开,例如年轻人骑车通勤,或城市提供共享单车。避免重复“travel”和“cities”,并尽量减少填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them to work or school, and bike-sharing services make it easy to travel around the city.
× My uncle purchased me a bike and I really like driving it in my childhood.
✓ My uncle purchased me a bike, and I really liked driving it in my childhood.
句子说的是童年时期的经历,属于过去时间,因此动词“like”应使用过去式“liked”。讲述过去发生的事情时,要确保相关动词的时态与过去时间一致。
× Definitely it's quite popular.
✓ Definitely, they are quite popular.
这里讨论的是复数名词“bikes”,所以应使用复数代词“they”,并搭配“are”,不能用指代单数事物的“it”。
× There are many young people like riding bikes.
✓ There are many young people who like riding bikes.
原句在“young people”和“like”之间缺少连接定语从句的关系代词。可以加上“who”,构成“young people who like riding bikes”;也可以简化为“Many young people like riding bikes”。