Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: 你重复了考官的问题,没有回答是否小时候有自行车。先直接回答“Yes”或“No”,再补充一两个具体细节,例如几岁开始骑、谁给你买的,或你通常在哪里骑。注意控制在五句话以内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也给出了原因,但“it's”指代不清,建议改为复数“bikes are”;“the worker”应改为“workers”,“will bike”在这里可改为“ride bikes”或“cycle”。“some students and workers”不够具体,可以说明他们骑车通勤或上学,并补充一个相关原因。避免使用填充词“uh”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and workers. Many people ride them to school or work because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.

“Bikes”是复数,因此后面应使用复数代词“they”,不能用单数代词“it”。修改后应为“they are very popular”。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.

这里是在泛指骑车的学生和工人,所以应使用复数“workers”,而不是单数“the worker”。泛指自行车时也可说“ride bikes”。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.

句子描述的是当前普遍存在的情况,通常用一般现在时“ride”,而不是“will bike”。表达日常骑车时,“ride bikes”也比“bike”更自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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