Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 你重复了考官的问题,没有回答是否小时候有自行车。先直接回答“Yes”或“No”,再补充一两个具体细节,例如几岁开始骑、谁给你买的,或你通常在哪里骑。注意控制在五句话以内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也给出了原因,但“it's”指代不清,建议改为复数“bikes are”;“the worker”应改为“workers”,“will bike”在这里可改为“ride bikes”或“cycle”。“some students and workers”不够具体,可以说明他们骑车通勤或上学,并补充一个相关原因。避免使用填充词“uh”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and workers. Many people ride them to school or work because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips.
× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.
“Bikes”是复数,因此后面应使用复数代词“they”,不能用单数代词“it”。修改后应为“they are very popular”。
× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.
这里是在泛指骑车的学生和工人,所以应使用复数“workers”,而不是单数“the worker”。泛指自行车时也可说“ride bikes”。
× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.
句子描述的是当前普遍存在的情况,通常用一般现在时“ride”,而不是“will bike”。表达日常骑车时,“ride bikes”也比“bike”更自然。