Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I didn't have a bag when I was a child because at that time my parents was poor. They couldn't afford the cost. So I
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Do you say when I was a child or now, now popular have a back is not popular in my country because we have more car. It is very convenient than a than a bag. But when I was a child
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答基本回应了问题,也给出了原因,但请确认你想表达的是“bike”而不是“bag”,并在全文中使用同一个词。注意主谓一致,应说“my parents were poor”。“They couldn't afford the cost”不够自然,可以说“they couldn't afford one”。最后一句没有说完;建议用完整句结束,并补充一个相关细节。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school or went with my friends on foot.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答“现在自行车在你们国家是否流行”,不要反问考官或转回童年经历。表达中“have a back”“a bag”等词可能与“bike”混淆;请使用准确词汇。比较时应说“more convenient than”,并说明汽车具体为什么更方便。最后一句不完整,建议控制在2—3个连贯句子内。
Ví dụ: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country nowadays because many people prefer cars. Cars are more convenient for longer journeys, especially when the weather is bad, although some people still cycle for exercise.
× At that time my parents was poor.
✓ At that time my parents were poor.
主语“my parents”是复数,因此 be 动词应使用复数形式“were”,不能用单数形式“was”。
× We have more car.
✓ We have more cars.
“more”表示数量更多,后面接可数名词时应使用复数形式,因此“car”应改为“cars”。
× It is very convenient than a than a bag.
✓ It is more convenient than a bag.
比较级结构应使用“more + 形容词 + than”。“very convenient than”结构错误;同时,重复的“a than a”应删去多余部分。