Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, in my home country bikes are not popular and when I was a child I used to have an usual bike and I didn't even use it because we lived in a city where a lot of cars and it's not really safe to to drive a bike.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Your answer directly addresses the question and is grammatically correct, but it is very brief. Add one specific detail, such as how often you rode it or where you used it, to make your response more engaging.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, especially at weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a relevant reason, but it is long and contains several awkward phrases. Say “an ordinary bike” or “a regular bike,” use “ride a bike” instead of “drive a bike,” and explain the traffic issue in a clearer sentence. Avoid repeating “to.”

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. When I was a child, I had an ordinary bike, but I rarely used it because the roads were busy with cars and didn’t feel safe for cycling.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× an usual bike

✓ a usual bike

Use a before usual because usual begins with a consonant sound, /j/; the choice between a and an depends on the sound, not the written letter.

3: There be issue

× a city where a lot of cars

✓ a city where there were a lot of cars

Use there were to say that cars existed in the city. Were agrees with the plural noun cars and matches the past-time context.

5: Past tense issue

× and it's not really safe

✓ and it wasn't really safe

The student is describing the time when they were a child and lived in the city, so the past tense wasn't is more consistent than the present-tense it's.

26: Sentence structure errors

× to to drive a bike

✓ to drive a bike

The infinitive marker to is repeated. Use it only once before the base verb: to drive.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Safe— Secure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
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