Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't. Because it's so hot, I don't think they will use it, but when the weather are good, they use it in the power cant like this.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: لم تُجب عن السؤال، بل كررتَه كما هو. أجب مباشرةً بنعم أو لا، ثم أضف تفصيلاً شخصياً واحداً، مثل عمرك عندما حصلت على الدراجة أو أين كنت تركبها.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: أشرتَ إلى أن الحر يقلل استخدام الدراجات، لكن بداية الإجابة «No, I didn't» لا تجيب عن السؤال؛ استخدم مثلاً «Not particularly» أو «Yes, they are». صحّح توافق الفعل والفاعل، مثل «the weather is good»، واستبدل العبارة غير الواضحة «in the power cant» بتعبير دقيق. رتّب الإجابة بوضوح: مدى انتشار الدراجات، ثم أثر الطقس ومثال محدد.

Ví dụ: Bikes are not particularly popular in my country because the weather is very hot for much of the year. However, when it is cooler, people are more likely to ride them in parks or quiet areas.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I don't.

The question asks whether bikes are popular now, so use the present-tense auxiliary don't rather than the past-tense didn't.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Because it's so hot, I don't think they will use it.

✓ I don't think people use bikes much because it's so hot.

Starting a separate sentence with Because leaves the reason clause attached awkwardly to the previous answer. Join the reason to a complete main clause. This revision also expresses a general opinion in the present tense.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× I don't think they will use it, but when the weather are good, they use it

✓ I don't think people use bikes much, but when the weather is good, they use them

Bikes is plural, so use them rather than it when referring to bikes. People is clearer than they here because no group of people has been introduced.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× when the weather are good

✓ when the weather is good

Weather is a singular, uncountable noun, so it takes the singular verb is, not are.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Hot— Heated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
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