Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was like 1212 years old. I have a bike, it's my first learn how to drive drive bike. I drive back in the around my house until I can drive it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bike it bikes are popular in our country because every our country has many electricity bikes. If you want to drive electricity bike, you should you should learn bike advanced so that you can drive electricity bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,并用过去时描述年龄和经历。注意使用“ride a bike”而不是“drive a bike”;“I first learned how to ride it”比“it's my first learn”更自然。可以补充一个具体细节,例如在哪里骑或骑车的感受,并避免重复和停顿。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about twelve. It was the first bike I learned to ride, and I used to practise around my house. I was really proud when I could ride it without help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 先清楚回答自行车是否受欢迎,再说明原因。将“electricity bikes”改为“electric bikes”或“e-bikes”,并使用“ride”而不是“drive”。避免重复“you should”,也不要加入不清楚的“learn bike advanced”;可以具体说明电动自行车常见的场景或用途。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes. Many people use them to commute because they are convenient and relatively affordable. You need to follow the local traffic rules when riding one.
× I have a bike, it's my first learn how to drive drive bike.
✓ I had a bike; it was the first bike I learned to ride.
这段话讲的是童年经历,应该使用过去时。这里的 “have” 应改为 “had”,“it’s” 应改为 “it was”,“learn” 应改为 “learned”。描述过去发生的事情时,要确保相关动词保持过去时态。
× I have a bike, it's my first learn how to drive drive bike.
✓ I had a bike; it was the first bike I learned to ride.
“it’s my first learn how to drive drive bike” 的句子结构不完整,不能直接用 “my first” 接 “learn how to...”。可以改为 “it was the first bike I learned to ride”,即“那是我学会骑的第一辆自行车”。
× I drive back in the around my house until I can drive it.
✓ I rode it around my house until I could ride it.
这句话描述的是过去的经历,所以应使用过去时:“drive” 改为 “rode”,“can” 改为 “could”。讲述过去发生的事情时,主句和相关从句中的动词通常都要与过去时间保持一致。
× I drive back in the around my house until I can drive it.
✓ I rode it around my house until I could ride it.
“around my house” 表示“在我家附近/绕着我家”,前面不需要加 “in the”。注意熟悉 “around + 地点” 的搭配。
× Yes, bike it bikes are popular in our country because every our country has many electricity bikes.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because our country has many electric bikes.
“bike it bikes” 有多余且重复的成分,使句子结构不通顺。作答时应直接说 “bikes are popular”。另外,“every our country” 也不能这样组合;可直接说 “our country has...”。
× Yes, bike it bikes are popular in our country because every our country has many electricity bikes.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because our country has many electric bikes.
“every” 不能直接放在 “our country” 前面表达“我们的国家”。这里要表达的是“我们的国家有很多……”,直接使用 “our country has many...”。
× Yes, bike it bikes are popular in our country because every our country has many electricity bikes.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because our country has many electric bikes.
“electricity” 是名词,不能在这里代替形容词修饰 “bikes”。表示“电动的”应使用形容词 “electric”,所以应说 “electric bikes”。
× If you want to drive electricity bike, you should you should learn bike advanced so that you can drive electricity bike.
✓ If you want to ride an electric bike, you should first learn how to ride a bike.
“bike” 是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词;以元音音素开头的 “electric” 前应使用 “an”,所以说 “an electric bike”。表达“学会骑自行车”时,可说 “learn how to ride a bike”。
× If you want to drive electricity bike, you should you should learn bike advanced so that you can drive electricity bike.
✓ If you want to ride an electric bike, you should first learn how to ride a bike.
“you should you should” 有重复成分;“learn bike advanced” 的语序和结构也不正确。可以用 “you should first learn how to ride a bike” 表达“你应该先学会骑自行车”。
× If you want to drive electricity bike, you should you should learn bike advanced so that you can drive electricity bike.
✓ If you want to ride an electric bike, you should first learn how to ride a bike.
这里应使用形容词 “electric” 修饰 “bike”,而不是名词 “electricity”。另外,“advanced” 放在 “learn bike” 后面无法表达原意;可改用 “first learn how to ride a bike”。