Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have a bike in my child. It's my parents buy for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think bike is popular in my country. Many people chat their all have our all have them bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车,并使用过去时:可以说“I had a bike when I was a child.” 后一句要表达“父母买给我”,可用“My parents bought it for me.” 还可以补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色或你常骑车去哪里。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about seven. It was red, and I often rode it around our neighbourhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答,并注意泛指时用复数“bikes are popular”。目前第二句表达不清楚;可以具体说明哪些人骑自行车、骑车的原因或常见场景,并用“because”或“for example”等连接词补充。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. You can also see lots of people cycling in parks at the weekend.
× Yes I have a bike in my child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,属于过去的情况,因此应将 have 改为过去式 had。描述小时候的状态时也应使用 was。
× Yes I have a bike in my child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
“in my child”不能表达“在我小时候”。应使用“when I was a child”(当我还是个孩子的时候)来表达这一时间。
× It's my parents buy for me.
✓ My parents bought it for me.
这句话描述父母过去为你买自行车,应使用 buy 的过去式 bought,而不是现在式 buy。
× It's my parents buy for me.
✓ My parents bought it for me.
原句把“It’s”和“my parents buy”错误地连在一起,主谓结构不完整且混乱。可以用“My parents”作主语、“bought”作谓语,并用“it”指代自行车。
× Yeah, I think bike is popular in my country.
✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数 bikes,并相应使用 are。
× Many people chat their all have our all have them bike.
✓ Many people have their own bikes.
原句中词语排列混乱,无法构成清楚、完整的句子。表达“许多人有自己的自行车”时,可按“主语 + 谓语 + 宾语”的顺序说“Many people have their own bikes.”
× Many people chat their all have our all have them bike.
✓ Many people have their own bikes.
“them”是宾格代词,不能直接放在名词 bike 前表示所属;此处要表达“他们自己的自行车”,应使用物主限定词 their,并可加 own 强调“自己的”。
× Many people chat their all have our all have them bike.
✓ Many people have their own bikes.
句子泛指许多人各自拥有的自行车,因此 bike 应使用复数 bikes。