Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答前先理清事实：你是有自己的自行车，还是没有？目前前后矛盾，而且结尾的“so my”没有说完。建议直接回答问题，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途或和朋友骑车的经历。减少“uh”和重复的“but”，并注意过去时：谈童年时用“were”“liked”“wanted”。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, although many of my friends did. I really wanted one so I could ride around the neighborhood with them.

Gợi ý: 先直接说明自行车是否受欢迎，再给出一两个具体原因或使用场景。注意语法搭配：用“a lot of people have”或“there are a lot of people who have”，用“healthy”而不是“health”，并列举出行目的时保持结构一致，如“to work or school”。“每个人都有自行车”的说法过于绝对，可改为“很多人”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and provide good exercise. However, not everyone owns one.

× At that time, there are a lot of children, just like my friends.

✓ At that time, there were a lot of children, including my friends.

“At that time”指过去的时间，因此应使用过去式“were”，而不是现在式“are”。讲述过去的经历时，要注意将相应的动词也改为过去式。

× They all like bike.

✓ They all liked bikes.

这里是在回忆童年，动词“like”应改为过去式“liked”。描述通常骑的自行车时，“bike”也应使用复数“bikes”。

× They all like bike.

✓ They all liked bikes.

这里泛指他们喜欢自行车，不是某一辆特定的自行车，因此可数名词“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。

× I have not so I really wanted a bike at the time.

✓ I didn't have one, so I really wanted a bike at the time.

句子讲的是过去的情况，“have not”是现在完成时形式，不适合这里的语境。应使用一般过去时否定形式“didn't have”。

× There are a lot of people have their own bikes.

✓ There are a lot of people who have their own bikes.

原句把“There are a lot of people”和“have their own bikes”直接拼接，缺少连接成分。可以在“people”后加关系代词“who”，引出修饰“people”的定语从句。

× Riding bikes to work or go to school is very health for myself.

✓ Riding bikes to work or going to school is very healthy for me.

“Riding”和“go”在这里并列，应使用形式一致的动名词“riding”和“going”。并列成分保持相同形式，句子会更符合语法。

× Riding bikes to work or go to school is very health for myself.

✓ Riding bikes to work or going to school is very healthy for me.

“is”后需要用形容词描述骑车或上学这件事。“health”是名词，应改为形容词“healthy”。

× Riding bikes to work or go to school is very health for myself.

✓ Riding bikes to work or going to school is very healthy for me.

这里的“for”后面需要普通宾格代词“me”。“myself”通常用于主语和宾语指向同一对象，或用于强调，不适合此处。

× Every people here have their own bikes.

✓ Every person here has their own bike.

“every”后应接单数可数名词，因此不能说“every people”。可以说“every person”，也可以说“all people”。

× Every people here have their own bikes.

✓ Every person here has their own bike.

“every person”的中心词“person”是单数，因此谓语动词也要用单数形式“has”，不能用“have”。