Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, I had a back when I was a child and uh, it's my mom sent me and she also taught me how to ride a bike and it's really a good memory and also, uh, I really like ride back.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Uh, well, it used to popular, but uh, now the most popular transportation may be the electronic bicycle. Uh, because you don't, uh, you don't feel tired when you ride it. So it's more popular in China. Uh, so it's not more, uh, so it's not popular in China as used to be.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 43.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再用一两句补充是谁送的、谁教你骑车,以及这段经历为何难忘。注意说“bike”,不要说“back”;“我妈妈送给我”可说“my mum gave it to me”,“我喜欢骑车”可说“I really liked riding it”。避免重复使用“uh”,并用过去时讲童年经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum gave it to me and taught me how to ride it. I remember feeling really excited when I learned, so it’s a lovely childhood memory.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 先明确回答“自行车是否仍然受欢迎”,并区分普通自行车和电动自行车,避免前后矛盾。可用“used to be popular”和“not as popular as they used to be”等表达;“电动自行车”通常说“electric bikes”,而不是“electronic bicycles”。补充具体原因时,可说明电动自行车省力、适合通勤,并减少口头填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still popular in China, although electric bikes are more common than traditional ones these days. They’re convenient for commuting because riders can travel farther without getting as tired. So, ordinary bikes are probably not as popular as they used to be.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× and uh, it's my mom sent me

✓ And, uh, my mom sent it to me.

原句把 “it’s” 和 “my mom sent me” 两种结构混在一起,句子结构不完整。表达“我妈妈把它寄给我”时,应说 “my mom sent it to me”;“it”指前文提到的自行车,“to me”表示寄送的对象。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词-ing形式)

× I really like ride back.

✓ I really like riding bikes.

动词 “like” 后面可以接动词-ing形式,因此应将 “ride” 改为 “riding”。这里用复数 “bikes” 泛指骑自行车这项活动。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× It used to popular.

✓ It used to be popular.

“used to” 后面需要接动词原形。这里的形容词 “popular” 前缺少动词 “be”,因此应说 “used to be popular”。

25: Comparative and superlative errors(比较级和最高级错误)

× So it's not popular in China as used to be.

✓ So it's not as popular in China as it used to be.

表达“没有以前那么受欢迎”时,应使用 “not as + 形容词 + as” 结构,所以要把 “not popular ... as” 改为 “not as popular ... as”。后半句还需要主语 “it”,指代前面的事物。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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