Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was doing. Instead I walked to my school with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course, bikes are very popular in our country. As we can see it's a modern era and a huge improvement in our technology due to which we had improved bikes with the huge system implemented along with them and we had a huge number of features which aligns a number of bikes to bike.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, but clarify your reason: “my parents thought I was too young” or explain what they thought you were doing. The phrase “I was doing” is incomplete, and “walked to my school” is less natural than “walked to school.” Add one specific detail about the walk if you can.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought I was too young to ride one safely. Instead, I walked to school with my friends, and we often chatted along the way.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and support it with a relevant reason or example. The discussion of the modern era and technology is confusing and repetitive, and phrases such as “we had improved bikes” and “aligns a number of bikes to bike” are unnatural. Use specific vocabulary, such as “commuting,” “traffic,” or “bike lanes,” and keep your response concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and can be quicker than driving in heavy traffic. There are also bike-sharing services in some areas.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was doing.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was too young to have one.

The phrase I was doing is incomplete because doing usually needs an object or a further explanation. A complete complement such as too young to have one makes the intended thought clear. Use a complete phrase after thought.

6: Present tense issue

× As we can see it's a modern era and a huge improvement in our technology due to which we had improved bikes with the huge system implemented along with them and we had a huge number of features which aligns a number of bikes to bike.

✓ As we can see, it's a modern era and a huge improvement in our technology, due to which we have improved bikes with the huge system implemented along with them, and we have a huge number of features which align a number of bikes to bike.

The response describes the present-day popularity and features of bikes, so have improved and have are more appropriate than the past-tense form had. Use the present perfect for developments that are relevant now, and the present simple for a situation that is true now.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× ...we had a huge number of features which aligns a number of bikes to bike.

✓ ...we have a huge number of features which align a number of bikes to bike.

The relative pronoun which refers to the plural noun features, so the verb must be plural: align, not aligns. Make the verb agree with the noun that which refers to.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Modern— Present-day; Fashionable
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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