Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was a child I have had a back and I like it very much because I can practice it to exercise myself and get a physical health.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in China because it's very convenient for daily life. It can decrease the commute time for workers and students who wanna go school.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但有多处语法和用词问题:描述童年经历应使用一般过去时,如“I had”;“back”应为“bike”;“practice it to exercise myself”和“get a physical health”不自然。建议先直接回答,再补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或它带来的好处。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, which was a fun way to get some exercise.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了便利这一理由,但第二句的代词应与“bikes”保持一致,可用“they”;“decrease the commute time”不够自然,可改为“save time”或“avoid traffic”;“wanna go school”应改为“want to get to school”。建议补充一个具体场景,并使用较正式的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China because they’re convenient for short trips. For example, students and office workers can cycle to school or work and avoid getting stuck in traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, when I was a child I have had a back and I like it very much because I can practice it to exercise myself and get a physical health.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike and liked it very much because I could use it to exercise and improve my physical health.

这里描述的是童年时的经历,应该使用过去时。应将“have had”改为“had”,将“like”改为“liked”。由于“can”表示现在或一般能力,描述当时的能力时应改为“could”。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Yes, when I was a child I have had a back and I like it very much because I can practice it to exercise myself and get a physical health.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike and liked it very much because I could use it to exercise and improve my physical health.

“health”在这里是不可数名词,不能在前面使用不定冠词“a”。可以说“my physical health”,不需要加“a”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in China because it's very convenient for daily life. It can decrease the commute time for workers and students who wanna go school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in China because they are very convenient for daily life. They can decrease commute time for workers and students who want to go to school.

“bikes”是复数名词,后面指代自行车时应使用复数代词“they”,不能使用单数的“it”或“it's”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in China because it's very convenient for daily life. It can decrease the commute time for workers and students who wanna go school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in China because they are very convenient for daily life. They can decrease commute time for workers and students who want to go to school.

表示“去上学”时,固定表达是“go to school”,不能省略介词“to”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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