Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had. I'm afraid of riding a bike. My grandfather bought me a bike but I have never used. Compared with bag, I prefer scooter.. Playing scooter is fun and safe for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because many people use the shared bikes. They can be borrowed everywhere. Using a shared bike is convenient for people

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并说明“有自行车”不代表“骑过自行车”,避免前后显得矛盾。注意语法:回答应为“Yes, I did”;“从未使用过”应说“I have never used it”。“Compared with bag”意思不清,建议删除或说明你更喜欢哪种交通工具;“Playing scooter”可改为“riding a scooter”。补充一两个具体原因即可,让回答自然且不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I was afraid of riding it. My grandfather bought it for me, but I never learned how to ride it. I preferred riding a scooter because it felt safer and more fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了共享单车这一具体原因。可以把“the shared bikes”改为更自然的“shared bikes”,并将“They can be borrowed everywhere”改为“they are available in many places”,避免“everywhere”过于绝对。最后可以补充一个具体好处,例如方便短途出行;同时注意句末标点。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. They are available in many places, so people can easily find one for a short trip. They’re also a convenient and affordable way to get around.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

回答以 Did you have... 开头的一般疑问句时,简短肯定回答通常用 did 代替前面提到的动词短语,不能直接说“Yes, I had”。建议记住结构:Yes, I did./No, I didn’t.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× My grandfather bought me a bike but I have never used.

✓ My grandfather bought me a bike, but I have never used it.

这里 use 是及物动词,需要宾语;代词 it 指代前面的 a bike。原句遗漏了宾语代词。建议检查动词是否需要宾语,并在后文用适当代词指代已提到的事物。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Compared with bag, I prefer scooter.

✓ Compared with a bag, I prefer a scooter.

bag 和 scooter 都是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词。此处应分别使用 a bag 和 a scooter。建议使用单数可数名词时检查是否需要 a、an 或 the。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article(定冠词使用错误)

× Yes, because many people use the shared bikes.

✓ Yes, because many people use shared bikes.

这里泛指许多人使用的共享单车,并非指双方都已明确知道的某一批单车,因此不需要定冠词 the。泛指复数名词时通常不加冠词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Afraid— Frightened; Reluctant
Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Safe— Secure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
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