Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-10-29 11:46:11

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I love it. It is my first traffic tour.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. My country students often bive to school.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 43.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,但后两句的时态和表达不自然。“I love it”应改为过去时“I loved it”;“my first traffic tour”不是自然的英语表达,可以具体说明这辆自行车给你带来的感受或用途。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 问题询问现在的看法,应回答“Yes, I do”,而不是“Yes, I did”。“My country students”语序不自然,可改为“Students in my country”;“bive”应为“ride bikes”。建议补充一个具体原因或场景,让回答更完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students, because many of them ride to school when they live nearby.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I love it.

✓ I loved it.

问题问的是你小时候的经历,因此回答应使用过去时。把一般现在时 love 改为过去式 loved,与过去的时间背景保持一致。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× It is my first traffic tour.

✓ It was my first traffic tour.

这句话描述的是小时候的经历,应使用过去时。把 is 改为 was。

6: Present tense issue(现在时错误)

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I do.

问题是“Do you think...?”,使用一般现在时的助动词 do 提问,因此肯定回答也应使用 do,而不是过去时的 did。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× My country students often bive to school.

✓ Students in my country often bike to school.

“My country students”的结构不自然;表示“我国家的学生”时,可以说“students in my country”。建议先写中心名词 students,再用 in my country 补充说明。

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