Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was a kid I usually rode a bike to school or park. It was a great way for me to relax and release my stress.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country because it's really convenient for citizens to go out and it's a great way to do some exercise.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也补充了骑车带来的好处。注意说“去公园”时应使用“to the park”;另外,“release my stress”不太自然,可以改为“relieve stress”或“unwind”。还可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的路线或当时的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and to the park near my home. It was a fun way to get around, and it helped me unwind after a busy day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,并给出了便利和锻炼两个理由。为了表达更自然,可将“citizens”换成更常用的“people”,将“go out”说得具体一些,例如“get around”;“do some exercise”也可以改为“get some exercise”。可补充一种常见骑行场景,让内容更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re a convenient way for people to get around, especially for short trips or commuting to work. Cycling is also an easy way to get some exercise.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× Yes, when I was a kid I usually rode a bike to school or park.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I usually rode a bike to school or the park.

这里的“park”是可数名词单数,前面通常需要限定词。此处指去公园,应该说“the park”。此外,“when I was a kid”是句首状语,从句后加逗号可使句子更清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Great— Considerable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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