Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a buy when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because Hong Kong is a a fasting, fasting country, so people like to bike for the uh working or in the holiday something like that.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: 你没有回答考官的问题,而是重复了问题;注意区分 **bike**(自行车)和 **buy**(买)。先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一个具体细节,例如什么时候骑车、在哪里骑,或是谁教你的。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it in the park near my home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 你给出了明确观点和原因,但表达不够自然,且有重复和填充词。可以用 **fast-paced city** 表达“节奏快的城市”,不要说 **fasting country**;同时说明骑车是否真的普遍,并给出具体场景。使用更自然的搭配,如 **cycle to work** 或 **go cycling at weekends**,并避免以含糊的 **something like that** 结尾。

Ví dụ: Yes, cycling is quite popular in Hong Kong, especially for leisure. Although the city is busy and crowded, many people enjoy cycling in parks or along the waterfront at weekends.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Yes, because Hong Kong is a a fasting, fasting country, so people like to bike for the uh working or in the holiday something like that.

✓ Yes, because Hong Kong is a fast-paced city, people like to ride bikes to work or during holidays.

“a a”重复使用了不定冠词,保留一个即可。另外,“for the working”中不应在表示活动的动名词前加“the”;此处可说“to work”。“in the holiday”表达不自然,可用“during holidays”。“because”已经表达原因,后面通常不再接“so”,因此删去“so”。

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