Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I had the a small a small blue bicycle when I was when I was 10. I I wrote it every day afternoon with my friends in in my.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. I think. I think electric bike is popular in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再用一两句补充自行车的外观和骑车经历。注意使用正确的动词“ride”(不是“write”),避免重复,并补全最后一句;例如说明你和朋友在哪里骑车。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was ten. I rode it with my friends every afternoon, usually around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 答案前后矛盾:先说“不受欢迎”,随后又说电动自行车很受欢迎。请明确表达观点,并补充具体原因或例子。注意说“electric bikes”,并减少重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They are convenient for short trips and help people avoid traffic jams.
× I had the a small a small blue bicycle when I was 10.
✓ I had a small blue bicycle when I was 10.
“Bicycle”是单数可数名词,前面需要一个冠词。这里应使用不定冠词“a”;“the a”重复使用了冠词。重复的“a small”属于口语中的重复表达,整理时删除即可。
× I think electric bike is popular in my country.
✓ I think an electric bike is popular in my country.
“Bike”是单数可数名词,泛指一辆电动自行车时,前面需要加不定冠词。“Electric”以元音音素开头,因此使用“an”,而不是“a”。