Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. This bike is yellow colorful. I'm very like it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Sure. Because my hometown often. Bike activity.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并用过去时描述童年经历:将“have”改为“had”。“yellow colorful”语序不自然,可说“a bright yellow bike”;“I'm very like it”应改为“I really liked it”。可以补充一两个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或感受,让回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bright yellow bike when I was a child. I really liked it because I could ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: 先完整、直接地回答“是”或“不是”,不要用“Because”单独起句。当前回答的后半部分不完整,建议说明自行车为何受欢迎,并补充具体用途或场景,例如通勤、锻炼或骑行活动。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. In my hometown, many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and affordable.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
这句话描述童年时的情况,属于过去时间,因此 have 应使用过去式 had。
× This bike is yellow colorful.
✓ This bike was yellow and colorful.
这句话继续描述童年时的自行车,应使用过去式 was,而不是现在式 is。
× This bike is yellow colorful.
✓ This bike was yellow and colorful.
两个形容词 yellow 和 colorful 并列描述自行车时,应使用 and 连接,不能直接连在一起。
× I'm very like it.
✓ I really liked it.
like 在这里是动词,very 通常不能直接修饰动词;表达“很喜欢”时,可用 really 修饰 liked。
× I'm very like it.
✓ I really liked it.
like 是实义动词,不能在这里放在 am 后面构成 “I'm like”。应直接使用主语加动词的结构:I liked it。
× I'm very like it.
✓ I really liked it.
学生是在回忆小时候的自行车,应使用过去式 liked;am 是现在式,也应删除。
× Because my hometown often.
✓ People in my hometown often ride bikes.
原句缺少谓语动词,often 后面也没有说明人们经常做什么。可以补上主语 people 和谓语 ride bikes,组成完整句子。
× Bike activity.
✓ Bike activities are popular.
原句只是名词短语,没有谓语动词。加入 are popular 后,句子才完整;泛指多种骑行活动时,activities 用复数。