Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, why? I'm young, my father give brought me a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think in my country. Amount of people now. Take bikes when they're when they go out to work.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,不要加上与问题无关的“why”。注意时态和动词形式:讲童年经历时用过去时,例如“my father bought me a bike”;“give brought”不能这样连用。可以补充一条具体信息,如自行车的颜色或你如何使用它,让回答更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a blue bike when I was about six. I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 32.0

Gợi ý: 开头应直接表达观点,例如“Yes, I think they are popular”。目前回答有多个不完整句子和重复表达;可改为完整句“More and more people ride bikes to work”。注意用“the number of people”或“more and more people”,而不是“amount of people”,并补充具体原因或好处,使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. More and more people ride them to work, especially in busy cities. They are convenient and can help people avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, why? I'm young, my father give brought me a bike.

✓ Yes. When I was young, my father brought me a bike.

题目问的是小时候的经历,因此应使用过去时。这里应将“I’m young”改为“When I was young”,并使用过去式“brought”。“give brought”是重复的动词表达,应保留一个合适的动词。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Amount of people now. Take bikes when they're when they go out to work.

✓ A number of people now take bikes when they go out to work.

“People”是可数名词复数,不能用“amount of”修饰;应使用“a number of”或“a lot of”。建议记住:“amount of”通常修饰不可数名词,“number of”修饰可数名词复数。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think in my country. Amount of people now. Take bikes when they're when they go out to work.

✓ Yes, I think that a number of people in my country now take bikes when they go out to work.

原回答中“I think in my country.”和“Amount of people now.”都没有组成完整、自然的句子;“Take bikes”也缺少明确的主语。此外,“when they're when they”有重复和未完成的表达。建议将相关意思合并成一个完整句子,并避免重复。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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