Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 과거 경험을 묻는 질문이므로 과거형을 일관되게 사용하세요. “I love”는 “I loved”로 바꾸고, “funny space by”는 의미가 불분명하므로 “fun places by bike”처럼 정확하게 표현해야 합니다. 답변 첫 부분에서 질문에 직접 답한 뒤, 누구와 어디로 갔는지 구체적인 예를 덧붙이세요. 한 문장에 이유와 결과를 모두 길게 연결하기보다 문장을 나누면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it with my friends after school. We often cycled to the park or a nearby playground.

Gợi ý: 자전거가 인기 있다는 의견을 직접 말한 점은 좋습니다. 다만 “There also there are”는 중복이므로 “There are also”로 고치고, “go their company” 대신 “go to work” 또는 “commute to work”를 사용하세요. 공원에서 여가를 즐기는 사람과 자전거로 출퇴근하는 사람을 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어 주고, 장소나 상황을 조금 더 구체적으로 설명하면 답변이 더 효과적입니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride them with friends or family in parks, especially on weekends. Also, some people cycle to work because it is an inexpensive and convenient way to commute.

× Yes, I was fond of riding a bike when I was a child because I love to hang out with my friends when I was in elementary school, so we went to a lot of funny space by.

✓ Yes, I was fond of riding a bike when I was a child because I loved to hang out with my friends when I was in elementary school, so we went to a lot of fun places by bike.

The sentence describes a past period, so love should be changed to loved to keep the tense consistent. When talking about a completed period in the past, use the simple past tense.

× Yes, I was fond of riding a bike when I was a child because I love to hang out with my friends when I was in elementary school, so we went to a lot of funny space by.

✓ Yes, I was fond of riding a bike when I was a child because I loved to hang out with my friends when I was in elementary school, so we went to a lot of fun places by bike.

A lot of is followed by a plural count noun when referring to multiple places. Use places rather than space in this context. To describe destinations where you had fun, places is also the appropriate noun.

× There also there are a lot of people who commute by bike to go their company.

✓ There are also a lot of people who commute by bike to their company.

The phrase There also there are repeats there and creates an awkward sentence structure. Use There are also to introduce the statement. A clearer structure is to say commute by bike to their company.

× There also there are a lot of people who commute by bike to go their company.

✓ There are also a lot of people who commute by bike to their company.

The verb go needs the preposition to before a destination, as in go to their company. In this sentence, commute by bike to their company is more concise and uses to correctly to mark the destination.