Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

All right, that's it. My 6th old gift from my parents. They want, they want to me to practice a bicycle and the uh, that came the better way to me to practice the willpower.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

In recent years, this transportation will be very populars in our country because gradually the time the poultry car will be pretty, uh, pretty, uh, pretty pollutions for the, uh, ear that will be.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本无法清楚表达完整意思,建议先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”。如果想说自行车是父母送的,可以用“for my sixth birthday”;表达父母希望你学骑车,可说“wanted me to learn how to ride it”。避免重复和停顿,并补充一个具体细节,例如你在哪里骑车或骑车带给你的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike for my sixth birthday because they wanted me to learn how to ride. I used to practise in a nearby park, and I really enjoyed it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有表达“自行车越来越受欢迎”和“汽车造成污染”的意思,但语法和关键词不准确,导致逻辑不清。建议先明确回答“是”或“不是”,再用现在完成时或一般现在时描述趋势,例如“Bikes have become more popular”。说明具体原因时,可提到空气污染、交通拥堵或环保,并使用“because”连接。注意“pollution”是不可数名词,不能说“pollutions”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes have become more popular in my country in recent years. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and produce no air pollution. They can also help reduce traffic congestion.

Ngữ pháp

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少动词)

× My 6th old gift from my parents.

✓ It was a gift from my parents when I was six years old.

原句只有名词短语,没有谓语动词,因此不是完整句。可加上“It was”构成完整句;表达年龄时用“six years old”,不能说“6th old”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× They want, they want to me to practice a bicycle.

✓ They wanted me to practice riding a bicycle.

这段内容讲的是童年时父母的要求,应使用过去时“wanted”,而不是现在时“want”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× They want, they want to me to practice a bicycle.

✓ They wanted me to practice riding a bicycle.

“want”后接“人 + to do”,应说“wanted me to…”,不能说“wanted to me to…”。建议记住结构“want/wanted + someone + to do something”。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词-ing形式错误)

× practice a bicycle

✓ practice riding a bicycle

“practice”后面接动词时,动词要用-ing形式。因此应说“practice riding a bicycle”,而不是“practice a bicycle”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× that came the better way to me to practice the willpower

✓ That was a good way for me to develop willpower.

原句的词语排列和动词搭配不符合英语句子结构。表达“这是我培养意志力的好方法”时,可用“That was a good way for me to develop willpower”。

7: Future tense issue(将来时错误)

× In recent years, this transportation will be very populars in our country

✓ In recent years, this means of transportation has become very popular in our country.

“In recent years”表示从过去持续到现在的时间段,不适合用“will be”表达将来。此处可用现在完成时“has become”,表示近年来已经变得流行。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× very populars

✓ very popular

“popular”是形容词,不随名词单复数变化,不能加“-s”。应说“very popular”。

10: Verb in the present participle form(现在分词形式错误)

× the poultry car will be pretty, uh, pretty, uh, pretty pollutions

✓ Cars are gradually polluting the air.

这里要表达汽车正在污染空气,应使用现在进行时“are polluting”。“pollutions”是名词,不能放在“are”后充当动词。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× pollutions for the, uh, ear

✓ polluting the air

表达“污染空气”时,动词“pollute”直接接宾语“the air”,不需要介词“for”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Better— Superior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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