Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
They do have a bicycle when I was a child and I then ate very long time.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答时先直接说明自己小时候有没有自行车。注意过去时:用“I had”,不要用“they do have”;“很长时间”应说“for a long time”,而不是“ate very long time”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或用途,并控制在一到两句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I kept it for several years. I often rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车在你所在国家是否流行,再解释原因或举例。避免使用不正确的结构“are chose”;可以用“many people choose to…”或“bikes are popular because…”。“去上班”可说“commute to work”,并注意不要在“the”和“their”前后重复使用限定词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to commute to work because they are affordable and convenient.
× They do have a bicycle when I was a child and I then ate very long time.
✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I had it for a very long time.
句子描述的是童年时期的经历,应使用过去时。原句中的“do have”是现在时形式,应改为“had”。另外,“ate”表示“吃”,不适合表达拥有自行车;这里改为“had it”。
× They do have a bicycle when I was a child and I then ate very long time.
✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I had it for a very long time.
前半句说的是学生自己小时候的经历,主语应使用第一人称“I”,而不是第三人称“They”。后文用“it”指代前面的“a bicycle”,可以避免重复。
× Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.
✓ Most people basically choose to go to their workplace.
这句话描述的是普遍情况,应使用一般现在时。“are chose”不是正确的一般现在时表达;主动句中应使用“choose”。
× Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.
✓ Most people basically choose to go to their workplace.
这里表达的是“大多数人选择去上班”,主语“Most people”是做出选择的人,应使用主动语态“choose”,而不是不正确的被动结构“are chose”。
× Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.
✓ Most people basically choose to go to their workplace.
“their”已经是限定词,前面不能再加定冠词“the”。因此应说“their workplace”,而不是“the their workplace”。