Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have a bike when I was a child my bike has a white color and pink. My mom gave me and A and I always driving to school and play with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, the bags are so popular in our country they feel a few years ago we have some legal about eco friendly and saves some resource resource save resource and reduce population so we always use.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, then use the past tense consistently: “had,” “was,” and “rode.” Describe the bike clearly (for example, “white and pink”) and explain who gave it to you. Replace the unclear phrase “and A” with the intended detail. Keep the answer to two or three connected sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was white and pink, and my mum gave it to me as a present. I often rode it to school and rode around with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Begin with a clear answer and use “bikes,” not “bags.” Explain one specific reason for their popularity, such as lower transport costs or less pollution. Use accurate phrases like “environmentally friendly,” “save resources,” and “reduce pollution”; avoid repeating the same idea. Check that your explanation is grammatically complete and easy to follow.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are an affordable and environmentally friendly way to travel, and they can help reduce air pollution. Many people use them for short trips or to commute to work.
× Yes I have a bike when I was a child
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The question asks about the past, and the phrase when I was a child sets the sentence in the past. Use had, the past tense of have, rather than have.
× my bike has a white color and pink.
✓ My bike was white and pink.
The student is describing a bike from childhood, so the past tense was is needed instead of the present-tense has. Describing it as white and pink is also a more natural way to express its colors.
× My mom gave me and A
✓ My mom gave me a bike.
The original phrase is incomplete and does not clearly state what the mother gave. Include the object of gave to make a complete, understandable sentence. This correction assumes the intended object was a bike.
× I always driving to school and play with my friends.
✓ I always rode it to school and played with my friends.
Driving cannot follow always in this sentence without an auxiliary verb. Since the student is talking about childhood, use the simple past rode. The coordinated verb should also be in the past form, played.
× I always driving to school and play with my friends.
✓ I always rode it to school and played with my friends.
The sentence describes repeated actions during childhood, so the verbs should be in the past tense: rode and played.
× they feel a few years ago we have some legal about eco friendly and saves some resource resource save resource and reduce population so we always use.
✓ I think that a few years ago we had some laws about being eco-friendly and saving resources, so we always use bikes.
The phrase a few years ago refers to the past, so use had rather than have. Laws is plural after some, and saving should be parallel with being after about. The final object bikes is included to clarify what the student means by use.
× they feel a few years ago we have some legal about eco friendly and saves some resource resource save resource and reduce population so we always use.
✓ I think that a few years ago we had some laws about being eco-friendly and saving resources, so we always use bikes.
Use the plural noun laws after some, and use the plural resources when referring to resources in general.